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Bullying is a big problem in many schools. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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These days
students
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 are more matured at
schools
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 rather than
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 times. While these
school
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students
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 encounter the problem of physical harassment that happens in many
schools
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 these days, these issues should be addressed by the
management
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 of that particular institution. In
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 I will examine the possible causes and will suggest
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resolution
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 for
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. To embark upon, the problems caused by bullying the
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 at
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 of
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 can be addressed by two causatives
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 as lethargic
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management
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 and psychologically affected
student
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.
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 lack of efficient
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 by the
school
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 might result in
students
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’
misbehavior
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 with
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their
 peers.
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 to say, the
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 creates the opportunity to tease the other folks inside the campus.
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,some children's might be affected psychologically by the environment encountered at their homes,
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 may lead to trouble
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 friends at the institution where they study.
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, If the parents were quarrelling at home, that boy would be affected mentally by the negative environment that happened in his life.
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 may induce him to develop
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 spirit himself.
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, these causes
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could be identified by examing the
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, who indulged in
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harassment
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 at
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school
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the school
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 campus. There are two possible solutions for the above reasons of teasing, one is improving the educational institution in the way of efficient
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 and the other is the specific
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 must be counselled by the educational psychologist.
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 educational
management
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 must be improved in aspects of both
administration
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 and monitoring
students
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 efficiently inside the circumstances.
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 ,the psychology
counselor
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 inside the compound should take the responsibility of
couselling
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counselling
 and identifying the children who
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 actually
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misbehaving or troubling other folks.
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,One of my friend's
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 was counselled at her
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 when she
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 on teasing her peers inside the classroom.Eventually,she was found relatively good after a period of
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,the bullying can be solved by these couple of ideas. In conclusion, Though bullying might be common in many other
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, due to
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 of
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school
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the school
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 and home disputes,
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 is likely rectified by the counselling of the
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 and the change in
school
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administration
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Bullying
  • Harassment
  • Intimidation
  • Diversity
  • Adolescent
  • Mimic
  • Aggressive behavior
  • Cyberbullying
  • Peer pressure
  • Social acceptance
  • Awareness
  • Conflict resolution
  • Peer mediation
  • Consequences
  • Respect
  • Kindness
  • Open communication
  • Vulnerable
  • Buddy system
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