Many animal species are becoming extinct as a result of human activities. What are the causes and possible solutions to this problem?

There are many races of
animals
which are completely vanished from
this
planet
.The reason may be attributed to various human activities which make the environment not suitable for
this
variety of
animals
to live
at
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. In
this
essay, I will be putting up the reasons and some possible ways to deal with
this
situation.
Firstly
, the main reason is the explosion in the population of humans on
this
planet
, and to cater
their
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need for more homes to live at, roads, industries and other infrastructure, jungles are cut down and are converted to concrete jungles, which has the major threat to our
wild life
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wildlife
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. For ,instance increasing dodo
bird
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birds
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, dinosaurs are part of our history only and these
type
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types
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of creatures are with us in our books and journals. The
second
reason is that there are many people for whom hunting and killing
animals
is
a
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fun because of
this
human beings are disturbing the food chain at
macro
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level.
For example
, cutting down trees will lead to less available food for herbivore
animals
like deer, elephants and their population will start decreasing which will
further
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effect
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the available food for carnivore
animals
like
lion
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lions
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,
leopard
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leopards
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, and
tiger
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tigers
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. So every single action has an impact on the balance of
this
planet
which is made by all of us & wildlife including
animals
, birds, and trees. Interestingly,
this
concern can be dealt with all the possible solutions, like educating people irrespective of their age. Kids can be taught in schools, the value of every kind of animal & these
animals
have equal rights to live on
this
planet
. Younger generations, elderly people can be taught by movies, dramas, reading materials etc.
In addition
,
a stringent legislation systems
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stringent legislation systems
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should be implemented with punishments monetary as well as non-monetary . So that, one thinks many times before harming any animal. To sum up, to stop
this
imbalance in our
eco-system
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, awareness about the problem, its causes, as well as the solutions, are equally important. Without knowing the problem, neither its reasons nor the solution can be thought of and vice versa.
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