Your colleague found another job and invited you to his/her farewell party. Unfortunately, you are unable to attend it. Write a letter to him/her and say – Why can’t you attend the party? – Why did you enjoy working with him/her? – Offer him/her to meet some other time.

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Dear Mr John, I am writing

this

letter to let you know that,

unfortunately

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,unfortunately

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I would not be able to attend your farewell party.

Although

I want to be a part of

this

celebration, the new project work that I took over from the

last

week is becoming a major obstacle to

this

However

, I had a great time working with you and will always miss your company around at the office. Let me explain to you in more detail.

Although

we had few differences in our approach towards work, still I had fun working with you. Your approach towards solving any critical issues and strategic thinking about various aspects of the business always inspired me.

Besides

that, your awesome sense of humour at challenging times was the stress buster.

Moreover

, I believe you are a true leader who can support as well as protect your team from any challenges. Henceforth, you motivated me in several ways. Could you please spare me some time

Friday? I would love to meet you over a cup of coffee. I will look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully Shreya

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I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

188 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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