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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Life
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 is full of changes. While some choose to do the same kind of things in their routine devoiding changes in
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, others prefer to adopt
difference
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,as they feel relatively good.In
this
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 essay,I will discuss both the statements and, opine my ideas. To embark upon,some
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 always delighted to option the accustomed activities in their
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life
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,
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 find themselves satisfied with what they have at
present
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 situation and,happy with it.
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 their satisfaction with their usual activities,they
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 tend to proceed their
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life
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 with it.
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 to say,they would like to carry over the habituated things in their future
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 and,not dare to encounter anything new.
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,One of my friends,Mr.Prakash
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has
contempted
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contemplated
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contented
 with what he has ,and, never has changed his
carreer
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career
 and the company for the past 15 years of his
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.
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,some others in
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 and, explore new events in their lives regardless of their comfort level.These
people
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,intended to do any sort of jobs or
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life-events
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life events
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 with
new
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a new
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 look and environment.
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 of
loosing
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 their
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convenience
confidence
convience
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 these
people
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 wander to experience fresh circumstances in their
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.
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 from science direct has exposed that certain sort of
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 with unique mentally has always look for changes to
fullfill
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fulfil
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acheivement
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achievement
. To conclude,though certain
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 are habituated
in
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to
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 doing
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things with no differences,I would prefer supporting the
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,who are keen
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 doing varieties in their daily performance,due to the fact that they would experience new
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 and lifestyle due to the challenging environment.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • status quo
  • stagnation
  • routine
  • comfort zone
  • predictability
  • specialization
  • innate
  • personal growth
  • adaptability
  • fast-paced
  • new horizons
  • equilibrium
  • progress
  • dynamic
  • transformation
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