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You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter -correct the information in the article -explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information -suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

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Dear Sir or Madam, It came to my knowledge that you exposed the beauties of the city I live in. Even though I was amazed to read about Sao Paulo
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 your travel magazine, it came to my concern that the information regards to the Botanic Park
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 during summer are mistaken. From March throughout August, they are open between 8am to 6pm
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 9am to 5pm which
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is what was advertised.
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 happens for a very special reason, due to the hot weather and the sun extending
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 out, the visitors are able to see some rare flowers,
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 as orchids and roses that flourish early in the morning when the sun rises, and some others as aloe and cactus that are in their best at sunset. I would recommend that you write an amendment in your magazine about the extended
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, underlining the magnificent nature work the visitors that come at early or late
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 will witness. Sincerely yours,

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