Children should never be educated at home by their parents do you agree or disagree ? Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

Many believe that young ones should never take care
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parents
in
education
,
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disagree with
this
statement because always
home
education
has
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prominant
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prominent
value in educating the present generation . In
this
essay,
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will discuss the merits and demerits points for the trend followers. Admittedly, changes are taking place in the
system
of
education
as
younger
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generation always think that they need to follow teachers instructions.
Firstly
and foremost,
reason
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is that
child
always prefer independent work and think that working
parents
does
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not have any time to respond and clarify their doubts.
However
,
this
becomes
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situation
in dealing with problems.
Secondly
, in the schools teachers expect their students to do work without depending upon the other person.
For instance
, 80% of students work including class assignments are done with the respective class teachers in
todays
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today's
educational
instituitions
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institutions
.
Finally
,
parents
think that their children having some problems in coping with the difficult
situation
.
Moreover
, they prefer
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the child
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child
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children
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to do
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the task
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task
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independently.
Furthermore
, youngsters always prefer to socialize, physically and
also
they need moral support in the future.
On the other hand
, some others think that their
child
need
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educated
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to be educated
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by
parents
at
home
because in the school
system
they cannot provide 100%
education
for their
child
.
However
, they think that children
needs
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care and
education
personally at
home
apart from the school
system
. To deal with emotional and mentally challenged
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young ones need
a
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support from their caregivers.
Moreover
, today generations are getting changed and always prefer social life. To conclude, children need to remember that
parents
are always supporters and
decision makers
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.
Although
there
are
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number
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of changes in
school
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the school
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system
home
education
has
an
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prominent place from
past
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the past
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to the present
situation
.
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