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Children should never be educated at home by their parents do you agree or disagree ? Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

#children #home #parents #people
Many believe that young ones should never take care
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the
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parents
 in
education
,
i
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 disagree with
this
 statement because always
home
education
 has
an
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prominant
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prominent
 value in educating the present generation . In
this
 essay,
i
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 will discuss the merits and demerits points for the trend followers. Admittedly, changes are taking place in the
system
 of
education
 as
younger
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 generation always think that they need to follow teachers instructions.
Firstly
 and foremost,
reason
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 is that
child
 always prefer independent work and think that working
parents
does
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 not have any time to respond and clarify their doubts.
However
,
this
 becomes
challenging
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situation
 in dealing with problems.
Secondly
, in the schools teachers expect their students to do work without depending upon the other person.
For instance
, 80% of students work including class assignments are done with the respective class teachers in
todays
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today's
 educational
instituitions
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institutions
.
Finally
,
parents
 think that their children having some problems in coping with the difficult
situation
.
Moreover
, they prefer
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the child
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child
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children
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 to do
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the task
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task
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 independently.
Furthermore
, youngsters always prefer to socialize, physically and
also
 they need moral support in the future.
On the other hand
, some others think that their
child
need
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educated
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to be educated
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 by
parents
 at
home
 because in the school
system
 they cannot provide 100%
education
 for their
child
.
However
, they think that children
needs
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 care and
education
 personally at
home
 apart from the school
system
. To deal with emotional and mentally challenged
situation
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 young ones need
a
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support from their caregivers.
Moreover
, today generations are getting changed and always prefer social life. To conclude, children need to remember that
parents
 are always supporters and
decision makers
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.
Although
 there
are
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number
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a number
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 of changes in
school
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the school
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system
home
education
 has
an
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a
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 prominent place from
past
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the past
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 to the present
situation
.
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