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There is a growing demand for fresh water nowadays and this is becoming a global problem. What are the causes and solutions?

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The demand
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 purified
water
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 has increased a lot in
the
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recent times and there is a shortage of
fresh
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freshwater
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water
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 globally. The main cause for
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 is wasting the
water
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 in high quantity.
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, constructing public
water
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 storing tanks can help.
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, individuals
world-wide
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 tend to use the
water
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 excessively and that results in
overuse
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the overuse
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 of natural resources.
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 to, say because citizens often use the
water
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 in their household works.
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, people open taps and
bath
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baths
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 with
high
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volume
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volumes
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 of
water
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.
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,
water
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 is overused and wasted.
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, in the region of Punjab, most residents open
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Household motors to refill their tanks.
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, they never off their motors due to which
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 is over-
consumped
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consumed
.
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, if local departments build big
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 tanks
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 that can resolve the issue.
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 has been said because the management
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 done by local authorities is super-active.
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, they can have
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proper control
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 the
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 supply systems.
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,
Delhi
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the Delhi
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 government announced the policy back in 2018 relating to the consumption of
water
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. It stated that users can have access to
water
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 during the day with limited supply.
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,
this
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 approach saved a huge amount of
water
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 back in the year 2018. In conclusion, the main reason
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such
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 happening is
wastage
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the wastage
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 of
water
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 in day-to-day household activities. But, constructing the large cities tank can help to tackle the problem of
high
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 demand
of
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water
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. These are the main causes and solutions for the above essay.
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