Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is often thought that choosing what an individual

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is associated with that person’s culture as well as upbringing. In

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would not affect anyone’s character, before arriving at a conclusion. Personally, I disagree with the statement because

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do not define an individual. The culture of a country is represented by history as well as

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, and not the personal preferences of its citizens. Sometimes,

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are even associated with social status. An excellent illustration of

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is that in the Philippines, those below the poverty line cannot afford

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proper clothing.

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, they are the ones who are known to be the most hardworking and credible people.

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would not define how ethical a person is.

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, a young boy

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ragged shirts, loose pants, and slippers does not equal

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being ill-mannered. It just shows that he may be comfortable in wearing these compared with their traditional

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, it should always be considered that there are specific clothing for special occasions that should be worn with the

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respect. In conclusion, others think that the choice of

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represents where a person came from as well as how well he or she grew up. Clothing is considered

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a privilege.

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, it is a way to express comfort.

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, it should be taken into consideration that certain pieces of clothing must be worn with dignity. Personally, I strongly believe that people’s preferences should be separated from their beliefs.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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4 paragraphs

261 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

garments
traditional attire
sartorial choices
expressive style
cultural identity
psychological implications
non-verbal cues
globalization
perceptions
professional demeanor
societal norms
economic constraints
subcultures
fashion movements
individualism
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Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problem as a result of eating to much fast food. It is neccesary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

The illustrations show how chocolate is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.