Many people are doing their shopping online on the internet nowadays. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of online shopping.
With the development of technology, most people from all over the world can buy and purchase things through the internet no matter how far the products are. Many famous online market brands
such
as Amazon, Ebay
, Taobao ,etc. Being able to ship overseas is the reason why people prefer to choose shopping online rather than shopping offline. Correct your spelling
eBay
However
, there are also
some drawbacks of
that as well. And here are the pros and cons of doing Change preposition
to
purchase
online. Fix the agreement mistake
purchases
Firstly
, about the benefits, it is a lot more convenient than normal shopping. Instead
of going to the market or the mall and spending hours to visit
every single store to find the thing you need, you can look at the pictures of all the products of that shop through the internet and Change the verb form
visiting
then
choose the one you want. It saves you tons of time and money for commuting. Secondly
, during the special days like the holidays or at the end of the season, there will be huge sales so the customers can get their favourite items with
a much cheaper price and most of them Change preposition
at
only
available online. Add a missing verb
are only
Furthermore
, it provides you multiple
payment options like cash, credit card, debit card and Change preposition
with multiple
transfering
. They have a return policy in case you did not receive the item you purchased or you were not satisfied with it so you can ask for an exchange or refund. Correct your spelling
transferring
On the other hand
, it has many disavantages
too. About the goods, the transporting is fast and easy if you buy Correct your spelling
disadvantages
it
domestically. But if you buy it abroad, you will have to wait for a long time because of the tariffs and shipping over long distances. Correct pronoun usage
them
Also
, sometimes you will meet the
internet frauds that gives you the wrong or fake items and won’t pay you back. Correct article usage
apply
Then
, they may sell your privacy
information Replace the word
private
such
as phone number, home address, etc. to other businesses for money. According to the reports, it is found that online scam cases have increased significantly in the
recent years. In conclusion, purchasing online has both pros and cons, but the advantages still outweigh and can offset the cons.Correct article usage
apply
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