Nowadays some countries encourage people to buy more and more products, which is good for economy. While others believe it is bad for the society. Discuss both views and give your opinion

At present days, the public in some nations

are

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motivated to purchase goods, which has aroused a discussion between different groups of

people

. While encouraging to buying

things

is beneficial to a nation's

economy

, I believe it is certainly detrimental to social development when

people

make unnecessary purchases. It certainly enhances the development of

economy

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when a greater number of

people

are willing to consume. The growth in the number of consumers means greater consumer demand, which definitely contributes to the development of some businesses.

For example

, during the period of the Olympic Games, there is a noticeable rise in the need

of

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sports goods and facilities. Companies which specialize in

such

field receive more orders during

this

time, thereby making greater profit during

this

time.

Also

, more job opportunities are created since more workers are needed to manufacture adequate goods to meet the need of customers.

However

, if more money is spent on items that are more than what

people

really need, the consequences can be detrimental to

the

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society.

First

of all,

this

behavior

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can result in waste. These products are not always necessary or satisfactory, which means they are very likely to be left untouched or even thrown away. It is not rare to see a seemingly fabulous coat that was bought on impulse stay in the closet without being put on again.

In addition

, encouraging

people

to buy more and more

things

is not helpful for

people

to form a positive attitude toward consumption. When they are used to

such

a style of consuming, they may become addicted to buying

things

without thinking carefully about whether they really need those

things

or not. Nowadays, a number of young adults are keen on buying flashy

things

, some of which,

however

,

are

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too pricey for them to afford,

such

as cutting-edged laptops, brand new cellphones, etc.

Therefore

, some of them choose to pay by credit card, ignoring the potential danger of

such

kind of payment. In conclusion, while it is true that consumption is an integral part of a nation's

economy

and encouraging

people

to buy products can boost the

economy

to a certain extent,

such

encouragement does harm to

the

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society when

people

don't base their purchases on their real demands and purchasing power.