Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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it is observed that many deliberately terminate

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by removing the fetus commonly. Some in

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legal while those against it consider it to be very sinful. The essay formulated below will discuss

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both these angles and

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will emphasize my viewpoint as to why abortion should be prohibited. Killing a

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who is still in the mother’s womb is a wrongful deed. Many organizations, religious leaders are against

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. They want the government to strictly enforce regulations on those who practise the

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. In rural areas of some countries, there is a norm that having

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girls is an omen to the family.

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is mostly seen in poor, uneducated families. The reason being that once a

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girl grows up to be a beautiful girl in the twenties they need to be given away for marriage. In these cases, the girl’s family needs to give the groom’s family a huge dowry

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cannot be borne by these families.

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most families tend to abort the

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at very early stages once the babies’ gender is known. But

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is illegal and not correct. How can another person decide the future of an individual who is not even born yet? Individuals performing these abortion processes should be punished for

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and these should be publicly advertised on media as well so that others in the society are aware of the results if

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an action is taken. Some in

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society are in

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and want the government to legalize it. These individuals are in the mindset that the future of a

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should be decided by the parents i.e. either to keep or kill the fetus depending on various factors

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as wealth, marital status, etc.

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shouldn’t be the case.

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now there are different protective mechanisms

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as birth control pills and condoms that individuals can use to avoid pregnancy. Legalizing

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will induce other problems within the society

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as rape. Considering these pointers, I’m of the opinion that abortion should be strictly banned regardless of age and marital status. Anyone who practises

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should be punished severely.

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Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Countries should spend money on trains rather than new roads. Do you agree or disagree?

In most successful organisations, some people believe that communication between managers and workers is important, other people say that other factors are more important. What is your opinion?

In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example for your own knowledge or experience.

Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.