Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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it is observed that many deliberately terminate
pregnancy
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a pregnancy
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by removing the fetus commonly. Some in
favor
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of
this
process
want to make
this
legal while those against it consider it to be very sinful. The essay formulated below will discuss
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both these angles and
lastly
will emphasize my viewpoint as to why abortion should be prohibited. Killing a
baby
who is still in the mother’s womb is a wrongful deed. Many organizations, religious leaders are against
this
wicked
process
. They want the government to strictly enforce regulations on those who practise the
process
. In rural areas of some countries, there is a norm that having
baby
girls is an omen to the family.
This
is mostly seen in poor, uneducated families. The reason being that once a
baby
girl grows up to be a beautiful girl in the twenties they need to be given away for marriage. In these cases, the girl’s family needs to give the groom’s family a huge dowry
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cannot be borne by these families.
Hence
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most families tend to abort the
baby
at very early stages once the babies’ gender is known. But
this
is illegal and not correct. How can another person decide the future of an individual who is not even born yet? Individuals performing these abortion processes should be punished for
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and these should be publicly advertised on media as well so that others in the society are aware of the results if
such
an action is taken. Some in
the
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society are in
favor
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of
this
process
and want the government to legalize it. These individuals are in the mindset that the future of a
baby
should be decided by the parents i.e. either to keep or kill the fetus depending on various factors
such
as wealth, marital status, etc.
This
shouldn’t be the case.
Also
now there are different protective mechanisms
such
as birth control pills and condoms that individuals can use to avoid pregnancy. Legalizing
this
process
will induce other problems within the society
such
as rape. Considering these pointers, I’m of the opinion that abortion should be strictly banned regardless of age and marital status. Anyone who practises
this
should be punished severely.
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