Some people think that teenagers should concentrate on all subjects at school. Other believe that teenager should focus on subjects they are the best at or they are most interested in. To what extend do you agree?

Schooling is one of the important phases of

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life. At the initial level of study, it is essential that students get familiar with all the subjects rather than concentrating on the selected topics. In my view, it is always better to have a holistic view, compare to a limited one. And, based on a thorough understanding,

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students can always opt for their interesting line.

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,

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, teenagers are not enough matured to make a decision that what subject is best for them and should opt for.

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, if they

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explore all the topics, how they can decide which one is more interesting

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to others.

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, it is highly advisable for

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students

to gain

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knowledge of all the

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subjects

in order to enhance

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personality and skills.

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, in school, they always emphasise

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all the lectures

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as Maths, History, Geography, Science, English, even including extra

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curriculum

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activities that are equally significant for developing student's mindset.

Subsequently

, would like to highlight that

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with

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, it might be challenging

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to compete with today's world, which might lead to

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failure.

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to that after the schooling, if they want to pursue some other

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, it will be very difficult for them to do so. As in that scenario, they might need to study a respective subject from scratch and that could delay their career progress. In summary, it is always better to go for a complete education rather than

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at the school level.

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will have a broader perspective to go with the desire.