People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems? Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns?
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people
inhabit in large cities so there are more issues everyday
. Others argue that Replace the word
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people
should be encouraged by the government to move to rurals
and other places.
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rural
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or without culture and so on. Hence
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be directed by the country. As an example, the workplaces are to created by the country, salaries have to become top that people
can pay their needs and others. Briefly, the moving isn't
necessary and crucial the way.
To sum up, in my opinion, if so measures are enforced by the country, probably the issues will decrease in the future and people
can realize their inhabiting opt more convenient, easier than before time. I have read that from various books, blogs and others running never is the solving.Submitted by aydin.quliyev2001 on
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