People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems? Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns?

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inhabit in large cities so there are more issues

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. Others argue that

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should be encouraged by the government to move to

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rural

and other places.

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of all, as a matter of ,

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fact there are some disadvantages or negative points in

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city life. As a pattern(,) more foods, markets, shoppings

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, on top of that there is pollution, throwing rubbish around, the lacking

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the oxygen than regional towns. I believe strongly, the problems establish from various reasons like without employment, the high rate of tax, the environment isn'

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defended by

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or without culture and so on.

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migration isn'

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indispensable and decisive because all

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can'

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move any places.

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own view on

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protective measures should be realized

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the government and citizens

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because the relationship is crucial so topics. What is ,more everybody has got the free selection chances so

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mustn'

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be directed by the country. As an example, the workplaces are to created by the country, salaries have to become top that

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can pay their needs and others. Briefly, the moving isn'

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necessary and crucial the way. To sum up, in my opinion, if so measures are enforced by the country, probably the issues will decrease in the future and

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can realize their inhabiting opt more convenient, easier than before time. I have read that from various books, blogs and others running never is the solving.