People living in large cites today face many problems in their everyday life. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns?

Most
people
choose to live in
large
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a large
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city
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cities
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aiming for comfort and practicality, but they are facing numerous problems
such
as noise, pollution and
traffic
congestion.
This
essay will discuss views why
individuos
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individuals
should
be encourage
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be encouraged
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to move to smaller
reginal
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regional
towns
.
First
of all, living in
big
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a big
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centre becomes
confortable
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comfortable
and practical, due to the ease to find many facilities closer
such
as
supermarket
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supermarkets
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,
shoppings
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shopping
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, public transports and
also
get more job
oportunities
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opportunities
, but it may annoying when
people
wants
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to relax
,
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because large cities are noisy.
Moreover
, there is
an
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apply
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intense
traffic
everyday
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every day
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and you can spend too much time
to move
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moving
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to your job, for
exemplo
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example
, and it may generate stress in those
live
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who live
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in large
centers
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centres
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.
Besides
, owing to high volumes of
traffic
are
increaseing
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increasing
levels of
pollutation
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pollution
, causing degradation of air quality that
contibuite
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contribute
to several types of
respiratories
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respiratory
respirators
dieseases
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diseases
. In fact,
people
should be
encorage
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encouraged
encourage
to move to small
towns
, because it may avoid cities gets overcrowded so that
traffic
will be reduced and
consequently
the pollution will and diseases will decrease.
Also
,
who
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those who
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lives in small
centers
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centres
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can get more
relexed
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relaxed
and peaceful.
Furthermore
,
people
moving to others
towns
to improve the economy from
this
region. In conclusion, in
acordance
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accordance
with the topic
discussesd
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discussed
above, governments should encourage
people
to
realocate
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relocate
reallocate
to regional
towns
can avoid serious
heath
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health
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issues and
icreasing
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increasing
economy from
another cities
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another city
other cities
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.
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