In many countries, the number of animals and plants is declining. Why do you think this is happening? How can this issue be solved?
Many nations,
animals
and plants
have being
Wrong verb form
been
extincted
Correct your spelling
extinct
by
many factors Change preposition
because of
such
as humans and climate change. These are some reasons that the figures for animals
and plants
are
decreased. Verb problem
have
This
essay will discuss some reasons and solutions.
First,
nowadays, global warming and climate change are more popular
, for Correct word choice
common
people
have emitted a large amount of CO2 and other substances from cars or industry; therefore
these affect directly to
the environment. Change preposition
apply
For example
, many countries have experienced threaten
from Replace the word
threats
wildfire
, caused by climate change, Fix the agreement mistake
wildfires
then
plant areas and some Correct word choice
and then
animals
are destroyed. In addition
, many plants
in the world are nearly extinct because a characteristic of some humans is greedy
to need some species of plant to build something. Replace the word
greed
Additionally
,people
have desired animals
to make cloth or accessories for a long-time
. To illustrate, in the past, humans and Correct your spelling
long time
animals
had the same habitat, where
Correct word choice
which
is
a forest, so Wrong verb form
was
this is
not weird if they Verb problem
it would
had
changed to Unnecessary verb
apply
hunt
; Wrong verb form
hunting
however
, these days, people
do not hunt for surviving
, they need to earn huge Change preposition
to survive
amount
money from these, and changing them to insane accessories.
To Fix the agreement mistake
amounts
this
solute
, the government should have stronger laws to protect these environments. Correct your spelling
solution
For instance
, the laws must affect some people
who might always avoid these problems by spending some money. Moreover
, the animals
should use technological science to copy genes which would help both animals
and the next generations to see these animals
. Furthermore
, the government should have some policies to reduce emitted
CO2 from the own cars and factories.
Correct article usage
the emitted
To conclude
, there are many reasons to affect the declining figures of animals
and plants
such
as emission
of CO2 and making accessories thing; Correct article usage
the emission
thus
the government should have policies and laws to protect these.Submitted by nutt.spider on
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