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in spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. why is this case? what can be done about this problem?

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Many
people
 worldwide are starving even though the agriculture sector has made a great improvement . The reasons for
this
 case might be because of the low income of society and the poor accessibility to their home. The
first
 reason is a massive number of
people
 only earn a little
money
 because of their job which as a menial labourer, or even worse, they do not have an opportunity to get an occupation.
Therefore
, they have insufficient
money
 to buy something for their lives.
Although
 the agricultural got advanced and the production is getting higher, it still needs
money
 to buy it.
Thus
, the
people
 who do not have adequate
money
 can not buy
the
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food and starve to death.
Secondly
, even if there are some kind
people
 or government who want to support
people
 who got hungry, they will find difficulties to reach the houses because there is only a poor connection road and there is no public transportation in that area and sometimes the houses are forgotten.
Consequently
,
people
 who lived there will be isolated and famish. The solutions for
this
 problem could be an improvement of connectivity between houses and main roads, recruitment of workers in the area, and subsidize food to them. The realization of these solutions possibility might depend mainly on the government. It is one of the government’s responsibilities to help their populace who starve and
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 an
appaling
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 state. In conclusion, the advancement of agriculture can not guarantee the
people
 not
to
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be poor and starving. The government needs to take
a
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real action to help them because they do not have an appropriate job and be isolated.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inequality
  • distribution
  • access to resources
  • climate change
  • natural disasters
  • political factors
  • economic factors
  • agricultural practices
  • infrastructure
  • transportation
  • population growth
  • education
  • knowledge
  • food waste
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