people naturally resist making changes in their lives. what kind of problem can this cause ? what solution can you suggest?

Sometimes
people
’s unconscious prevents them from being part of a new experience in their
life
, and I think
this
may cause
people
never start new challenges (jobs, business, studies…) and after years they stay in
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stage as they were before. One effective way which is psychologist taking about
that is
learning from previous mistakes and take it as
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to the future. Everybody had bad memories from the time they decided
making
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change
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in their
life
,
then
suddenly everything went wrong, and they could not reach
to
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their goals at that moment, but the point is they could try harder for
next
time. they should stand after each fall if they want to build their
life
and learn from
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decisions. Every person who wants
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changes
in their
life
,
they
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should make new habits. Recent research shows us takes 21 days to make a new habit,
for
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if someone usually
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up at noon it takes 21 days to change and get used to early morning, the problem is
people
do not have enough patient and desire for these
changes
then
they void doing them at all. I think the obvious solution is they persist to
changes
however
, it seems small and inconsiderable and
take
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their steps with hope because if
people
making
changes
progressively it might be easier for them. In conclusion,
people
they must know that making mistakes is the way to understands what the problems are and how to fix them,
therefor
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they should not have fears from accepting new challenges in their
life
because of the oncoming mistakes in the future,
also
they could get professional
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from
psychologist
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to accomplish
changes
. They
also
should be aware that every change takes time, and they could not jump to
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lifestyle
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