‘Is it ethically acceptable for this couple to choose to implant a ‘deaf’ embryo?’

In my ,opinion I agree with the law which states that an embryo
that is
created through IVF shouldn’
t
be implanted if they are identified as having any gene, chromosomal or mitochondrial abnormality. Linking it to the above case study, embryos recognised as having hearing abnormality shouldn’
t
be implanted. Who decides what a "serious" physical or mental disability is? There are some things on which we could probably all agree. If the fetus won'
t
be able to survive to birth, that would probably count as would a disability that would cause the baby a great deal of pain and
then
probable death within the
first
year of life.
However
, once we get into other sorts of issues,
this
decision may not be so easy for 100% of prospective parents and government officials to agree on. I do agree with some of the views and the opinions of the deaf parents that even deaf
people
have their culture and identity and I strongly agree
upon
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the fact that the deaf
are
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equal to the listeners.
Although
the argument that
this
promotes deaf
people
as being less valuable than hearing
people
is strong, I don'
t
believe parents should have the right to choose to give a child a feature
which
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could potentially set them back when there are other options available. By selecting the type of qualities, we want in the embryo we are supporting the idea of designer babies, except selecting babies with certain eye
colour
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, we are selecting certain
disability
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. One should always aim for the least harm possible. By applying
this
principle in the situation, the best course of action would be to, if possible, prevent the child from being deaf.
This
is because being deaf would cause a lot of
inconvince
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inconvenience
to the child. But that doesn’
t
mean that the deaf
are
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less valuable than those who are not. To conclude,
this
argument is a difficult one because on one
hand
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I think, If I was deaf I would not want to be destroyed just because I was deaf. it could be said that
this
in itself is discrimination against deaf
people
. But
then
on
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the other hand, would one knowingly bringing a deaf person into
this
world be ethically right, to that I would answer no because it would put them at a disadvantage to other children.
However
, would deaf
people
argue that they aren'
t
at a disadvantage, but
then
again would they know the true answer as they don'
t
know what it's like to be fully hearing
.
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If I was to have a solution to
this
, I would say that screening an embryo shouldn'
t
happen,
this
erases the thought of choosing a baby and it’s just a situation of ' you get what you get'
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