Computers are now the basis of the modern world. They should therefore be introduced into classrooms, and their programs used for direct teaching purposes. However, dependence on computers in teaching may carry a certain degree of risk to students. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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has become more essential in teaching.While

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programs are used in the classrooms by the teachers , the dependent circumstances on teaching

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obtained some risk associated with the

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learning. In

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essay, I will examine

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both sides and give

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opinion. To embark with, learning through

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computer stored

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applications in the classroom as well as individual learning by the

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are positively impacted in many aspects in understanding their concepts more clearly.

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to say,

students

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envision themselves by visualizing the animations that have been installed with the program,

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they grasp the subjects relatively better rather

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by some inefficient teachers.

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,

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time

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has been consumed in terms of devoiding copying notes on each

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from the classroom.

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,If the pupils are provided with personal computers

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learning,

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wont

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be any chances

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taking hints during the learning hours as they would be getting soft copies of their notes.

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,In spite of gaining knowledge and understanding from system storage ,the graduates

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fewer opportunities to interact with tutors while obtaining lessons.

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,learners are less communicated with mentors that would lead to inefficient verbal skills and personality development.

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,

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kind of teaching will ruin the reading habits of every

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,so that could negatively pose their thinking ability.

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of

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scholars or scientist has progressed in their professional work only with the ability

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books and

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research

articles.

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,certain risks are associated

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providing prerecorded sessions. In conclusion,though recorded information

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beneficial to some extent for direct teaching aspects;

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, unless various themes are taught by the mentors

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classrooms ,there won’t be much development in

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and profession of those candidates.

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,

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my perspective

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of

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learning, direct guidance by the lecturers are more advantageous.