Computers are now the basis of the modern world. They should therefore be introduced into classrooms, and their programs used for direct teaching purposes. However, dependence on computers in teaching may carry a certain degree of risk to students. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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contemporary
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computer
has become more essential in teaching.While
computer
programs are used in the classrooms by the teachers , the dependent circumstances on teaching
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obtained some risk associated with the
students
learning. In
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both sides and give
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opinion. To embark with, learning through
computer stored
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applications in the classroom as well as individual learning by the
students
are positively impacted in many aspects in understanding their concepts more clearly.
That is
to say,
students
envision themselves by visualizing the animations that have been installed with the program,
also
they grasp the subjects relatively better rather
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by some inefficient teachers.
In addition
,
students
time
also
has been consumed in terms of devoiding copying notes on each
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from the classroom.
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,If the pupils are provided with personal computers
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learning,
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wont
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be any chances
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taking hints during the learning hours as they would be getting soft copies of their notes.
However
,In spite of gaining knowledge and understanding from system storage ,the graduates
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fewer opportunities to interact with tutors while obtaining lessons.
Therefore
,learners are less communicated with mentors that would lead to inefficient verbal skills and personality development.
Besides
,
this
kind of teaching will ruin the reading habits of every
scholars
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,so that could negatively pose their thinking ability.
For instance
,many
number
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numbers
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of
reasearch
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research
scholars or scientist has progressed in their professional work only with the ability
of reading
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books and
reserach
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research
articles.
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,certain risks are associated
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providing prerecorded sessions. In conclusion,though recorded information
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beneficial to some extent for direct teaching aspects;
however
, unless various themes are taught by the mentors
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classrooms ,there won’t be much development in
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and profession of those candidates.
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my perspective
instead
of
computer
learning, direct guidance by the lecturers are more advantageous.
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