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many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time and how health problems as a result why do so many working people not get enough exercise? what can be done about this problem?

#people #exercise #time #health
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In the 21st
century
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people
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more busy
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to make
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 money and they don't have any time to do physical activity.
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,
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 leads to
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enormous unhealthy changes in our lifestyle. in
this
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 essay, I will explain the various consequences in regards
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 the lack of physical
exercise
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 and suggestions related to the problem.
To begin
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 with, industrialisation brings enormous changes in the
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 of
people
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 drastically.
in addition
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 to
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, it is evident that the
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 rapid development introduced by the standard of
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 is not satisfactory to meet the requirements for
healthy
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life
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. As the reason,
people
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work
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 hard for getting more money from their
work
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 in order to
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 their needs. admittedly, while meeting the task of their job, they are no longer get substantial time for physical activities. Apparently, more
work
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 means more stress that makes an imbalance with their professional and personal
life
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.
as a result
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, many employees now facing
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 problems like high blood pressure, cholesterol and diabetics in spite of rapid growth in
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modern medicines. to illustrate
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, in 2018 Government of India conducted a health survey among professionals in which 75% of the research samples indicates
lack
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 of
exercise
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 and lifestyle diseases due to the high volume of
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workload
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work load
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. It is undoubtedly
priven
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proven
 that human beings need proper physical and mental
exercise
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 for leading a healthy
life
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.
firstly
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, everyone should hold
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proper planning for their daily
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spend at least half an hour
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 any physical activities like yoga, cardio or meditation.
secondly
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, industries and
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 companies do not provide adequate breaks in between the
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 schedule that
also
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 leads to
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stressful working hours. it points out that the employees desperately required proper time scheduled for their
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 and
exercise
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.
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, Government and welfare authorities should educate
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for
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 the importance of healthy
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 since it is more beneficial for youngsters.
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, due to
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 working policy of
Indian
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 government, 60% of technical companies implemented weekly yoga and meditation
practice
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practices
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 among their workers to reduce
the
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stress and mental illness. In conclusion,
world
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 is developing day by day but these changes cannot replace the value of human
life
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. so we should respect our body, do
exercise
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 regularly and make sure that health is wealth which is not replaceable.
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  • Conclusion

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Time constraints
  • Sedentary lifestyle
  • Passive leisure activities
  • Workplace wellness programs
  • Active commuting
  • Subsidized
  • Public awareness
  • Health benefits
  • Incentivizing
  • Accessible public spaces
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