Traffic congestion is becoming more and more common in urban areas. What are the causes? What solutions can be adopted to solve this problem?

It is true that traffic jams

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big

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problem for many major cities.

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essay will discuss the reasons behind

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phenomenon

and

then

offer feasible solutions to it. There are a number of factors responsible for

congestion

. Chief among these is that cities attract to

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of migrated people ,

then

leading to the exploding population in many cities ,

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the infrastructure

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not insufficient and improving enough to adapt to rising the need and demands of citizens. As a consequence , the streets become overcrowded and being a

botteneck

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bottleneck

bottle neck

every time .Ho Chi Minh city ,

for example

, always have

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traffic

congestion

almost every time

especiallly

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especially

in

rush

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-hour ,

hence

the excessive

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number

of commutes in the city .Another reason is that people prefer using

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private

vehicles

rather than public

transport

. Because it is time-saving and

convinient

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convenient

.

Consequently

,

this

demand attributes to traffic jams. Various measures,

nevertheless

, can be adopted to tackle the situation. The

first

possible

apppoach

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approach

is that the government should invest

money

to improve

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public

transport

as well as

infrustructure

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infrastructure

with

modern

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system.

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will encourage citizens to use the public

transport

insead

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instead

of their own

vehicles

,

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because it is low taxes and

convinient

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convenient

convenience

. As the result , the

congestion

can decrease significantly . The

second

solution is that the authorities should impose the strict law that people must pay more

money

when moving by private

vehicles

in the peak-time. London ,

for example

,

peple

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people

are charged

money

for driving by their cars in the rush-hour and

this

charging

money

will use for improving the

transport

system .

Therefore

, the number of

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private

vehicles

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congestion

will

be decrease

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. In conclusion , these are several reasons

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to explain why

congestion

is

common

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problem for many

metropolis

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metropolia

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.

However

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steps can be taken to alleviate

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issues.