Traffic congestion is becoming more and more common in urban areas. What are the causes? What solutions can be adopted to solve this problem?

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problem for many major cities.

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offer feasible solutions to it. There are a number of factors responsible for

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. Chief among these is that cities attract to

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leading to the exploding population in many cities ,

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the infrastructure

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not insufficient and improving enough to adapt to rising the need and demands of citizens. As a consequence , the streets become overcrowded and being a

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the excessive

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of commutes in the city .Another reason is that people prefer using

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rather than public

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demand attributes to traffic jams. Various measures,

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, can be adopted to tackle the situation. The

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possible

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is that the government should invest

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to improve

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infrastructure

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system.

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will encourage citizens to use the public

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because it is low taxes and

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can decrease significantly . The

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solution is that the authorities should impose the strict law that people must pay more

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when moving by private

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in the peak-time. London ,

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people

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for driving by their cars in the rush-hour and

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charging

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system .

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, the number of

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to explain why

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problem for many

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steps can be taken to alleviate

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issues.