In the past, most people lived in the countryside and worked in farming. Some people believe that this was a better way of life than the way most people live today. To what extent do you agree or disagree
Now a days
majority of the Correct the word
Nowadays
people
extensively moving from rural areas
to city
side. Add an article
the city
However
,at the same time
some Add a comma
,time
people
like to follow traditional agrarian life
and they thinks
that it helps to give them a better Change the verb form
think
life
. My knowledge proves the notion that life
in village
gives more benefit among Add an article
the village
people
which will be explains
in the following paragraphs.
Change the verb form
be explained
Moreover
countryside
provides numerous benefits Correct article usage
the countryside
among
Change preposition
for
people
to restore their life
meaningful. Undoubtedly, agriculture is the primary occupation of villagers and it resultsAdd the preposition
in
from
people
. In addition
, these village
are the main producers of all organic food and materials, it will Change the determiner
villages
helps
rest of the population as well. Change the verb form
help
On the other hand
, the main characteristics of rural areas
consists
less population, healthy environment cooperation and coordination among neighbours and Change the verb form
consist
this
brings Ideal
environment for Correct article usage
an Ideal
people
's to live. For example
, according to world
health organisation study of happiness in 2016 points out that 75% of villages are happier than Correct article usage
the world
city
life
.
Apparently, in urban areas
we can get good transportation, living standard and better Add a comma
,areas
educatio
. Correct your spelling
education
Nevertheless
, city
life
is more stressful and most of the families over there are broken. Admittedly, city
is the land of Add an article
the city
anonimous
Correct your spelling
anonymous
people
because no one care about others and all of them are living in their own nutshell. Reportedly, while comparing crime rates and suicide, urban areas
taken over the first
position.To illustrate this
, statistical crime rates of India shows that majority of criminal activities are happening in cities so it will show the advantages of village
.
In conclusion, there is a saying a 'bird without wings 'Add an article
the village
similarly
man needs a peaceful life
. village
life
provides calm
and prosperous experience for its inmates and it always Correct article usage
a calm
motivate
the relationship between human beings and Change the verb form
motivates
mother
of natureCorrect article usage
the mother
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