In the past, most people lived in the countryside and worked in farming. Some people believe that this was a better way of life than the way most people live today. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Now a days
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majority of the
people
extensively moving from rural
areas
to
city
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the city
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side.
However
,at the same
time
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,time
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some
people
like to follow traditional agrarian
life
and they
thinks
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that it helps to give them a better
life
. My knowledge proves the notion that
life
in
village
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the village
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gives more benefit among
people
which will
be explains
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in the following paragraphs.
Moreover
countryside
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the countryside
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provides numerous benefits
among
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people
to restore their
life
meaningful. Undoubtedly, agriculture is the primary occupation of villagers and it results
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in
from
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self-sufficiency among the
people
.
In addition
, these
village
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villages
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are the main producers of all organic food and materials, it will
helps
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help
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rest of the population as well.
On the other hand
, the main characteristics of rural
areas
consists
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consist
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less population, healthy environment cooperation and coordination among neighbours and
this
brings
Ideal
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an Ideal
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environment for
people
's to live.
For example
, according to
world
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the world
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health organisation study of happiness in 2016 points out that 75% of villages are happier than
city
life
. Apparently, in urban
areas
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,areas
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we can get good transportation, living standard and better
educatio
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education
.
Nevertheless
,
city
life
is more stressful and most of the families over there are broken. Admittedly,
city
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is the land of
anonimous
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anonymous
people
because no one care about others and all of them are living in their own nutshell. Reportedly, while comparing crime rates and suicide, urban
areas
taken over the
first
position.To illustrate
this
, statistical crime rates of India shows that majority of criminal activities are happening in cities so it will show the advantages of
village
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the village
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. In conclusion, there is a saying a 'bird without wings '
similarly
man needs a peaceful
life
.
village
life
provides
calm
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a calm
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and prosperous experience for its inmates and it always
motivate
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motivates
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the relationship between human beings and
mother
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the mother
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of nature
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • countryside
  • farming
  • urbanization
  • stress-free
  • tight-knit
  • sustainable
  • subsistence
  • technological sophistication
  • professional advancement
  • quality of life
  • romanticize
  • ancestral
  • industrial revolution
  • agrarian
  • nostalgic
  • diversification
  • modern conveniences
  • holistic well-being
  • social dynamics
  • longevity
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