Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree?
Several individuals think that social media applications have had a massive negative
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effect
affect
on users and society. Correct your spelling
effect
This
essay agrees with the above statement and argues that such
websites have wasted people's time
and spread hatred.
Firstly
, several people have created profiles on sites and have spent a massive amount of their time
. That is
to, say because various citizens from different parts of the world frequently post videos. Due to which the
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such
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. For example
, Instagram is famous Correct your spelling
worldwide
world wide
. Information technology departments of Correct your spelling
worldwide
Indian
government have reported that users spent approximately 10 hours per day on Instagram.
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Secondly
, numerous sensitive videos and posts were shared on web pages. As a result
, hatred and negativity was
spread among residents. That has been said because clips contained fighting and criticism in them that broke the peace. Change the verb form
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Also
, many controversial debates took place on social networking sites. For instance
, in recent times, a very conflicting case took place in Change the capitalization
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indian
region. In Correct article usage
the indian
this
case
identify holders tried to fight on Facebook to individuals belonging to other Muslims and Hindu religions.
In conclusion, people have used sharing Add a comma
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application
for a huge period. As a consequence, they have wasted their productive Fix the agreement mistake
applications
time
. Furthermore
, it also
has created the
violence among citizens. Correct article usage
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