Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree?

Several individuals think that social media applications have had a massive negative
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on users and society.
This
essay agrees with the above statement and argues that
such
websites have wasted people's
time
and spread hatred.
Firstly
, several people have created profiles on sites and have spent a massive amount of their
time
.
That is
to, say because various citizens from different parts of the world frequently post videos. Due to which
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large
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number of residents see
such
shared videos for a long
time
.
For example
, Instagram is famous
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world wide
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. Information technology departments of
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government have reported that users spent approximately 10 hours per day on Instagram.
Secondly
, numerous sensitive videos and posts were shared on web pages.
As a result
, hatred and negativity
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spread among residents. That has been said because clips contained fighting and criticism in them that broke the peace.
Also
, many controversial debates took place on social networking sites.
For instance
, in recent times, a very conflicting case took place in
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indian
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region. In
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identify holders tried to fight on Facebook to individuals belonging to other Muslims and Hindu religions. In conclusion, people have used sharing
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for a huge period. As a consequence, they have wasted their productive
time
.
Furthermore
, it
also
has created
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violence among citizens.
This
has happened by sharing written articles and clips.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • erosion
  • face-to-face
  • interactions
  • privacy concerns
  • data breaches
  • misinformation
  • polarize
  • cyberbullying
  • online harassment
  • procrastination
  • productivity
  • social isolation
  • dissemination
  • breeding ground
  • vast amounts
  • personal information
  • mental health
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