In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the majority of countries, the minority of

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have high salaries. Some

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believe that

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is a beneficial development for countries as usually high wages are deserved by

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who

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important for the development of the

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. While others suppose that governments ought to introduce a

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upper limit boundary in order to minimise inequality in the

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which might cause fragmentation of the

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detrimental consequences. I agree with the latter category. On the one hand, every

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appears to have a tiny amount of

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who may influence either

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or the

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's future significantly.

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group of citizens are represented by scientists, politicians, spies and other members of secret governmental organisations.

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, the creation of new types of rockets for military purposes, dealing with international conflicts, obtaining secret information about other countries-all these actions can have a crucial impact on societies future,

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who do essential work for the

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should have a considerably higher

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than others.

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, unequal distribution of wages within

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can contribute to the splitting of

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;

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, which may cause a civil war and waves of protests.

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, the civil war with

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revolution took place in Russian Empire in 1917 and, as result, there were a lot of victims and increased the rates of emigration which affected detrimentally on the economy of the

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. In the light of thoughts elaborated upon, I would like to reiterate that

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some

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assume that the tiny proportion of

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deserved high

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as they do crucial work for the national interests of the

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, I believe that

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limits should be introduced to reduce inequality of citizens income;

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, the fragmentation of the

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may encourage the collapse of the

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.