Some people think that zoos are cruel and all the zoos should be closed. However, others think that zoos are useful to protect rare animals. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

It is an undeniable fact that

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are a vital pillar of our habitat and plays a promising role in balancing the ecosystem.a popular debate circulating around us is regarding the establishment of

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.a folk believes

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are cruel while others oppose

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theory.the following essay will highlight both aspects.

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with, a community

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favours the

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existence

of

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put forward their stance by stating

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as an institute that look after

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.these days the rate at which animal extinction is increasing tremendously.to alter the situation

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can offer a helping hand.according to a recent study,efforts are being done to preserve species of pandas in the USA which are becoming rare speedily. Another point to ponder upon is a zoo is a place where animal rights are preserved and they are given deserving treatment.laws by the government are imposed to ensure their health and social environment.

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legislative teams are established who survey and analyse the application of that rules. On the other side of the coin,a massive community oppose the

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existence

of

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.they often relate

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with

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cruelty

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of torture for

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.they put forward the hypothesis that wild

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who are habitual of living in huge forests are trapped in cages.along with

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they are beaten and punished

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the name of training.a recent incident took place at

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zoo in china where a lion was beaten with

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on

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not responding to his

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command.

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maintenance

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the maintance

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of

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the zoo

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is an expensive activity.

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medical

facilities including medicines ,

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doctor

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and

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veterinary

tools can contribute

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a handsome amount.along with

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food and recreational

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equipment

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for

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no too cost

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a lot

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factors like cost and forceful taming outlook facts like animal preservation and protection.Serious efforts must be done to sort out things

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and

facilitate

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with

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artificially

created habitat which is closest to the natural one.