Young people today spend too much money and time following fashion trends (clothing, tech). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In

this

day and age, there are many fashion trends

as well as

advanced technology that are

attracted by

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youngers

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younger

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. Many people believe that

youngers

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youngsters

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waste too much

time

and

money

to follow these latest trends. As far as I

concerned

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, I partly agree with

this

statement for the below reasons. On the one hand, it is true that some young people are willing to pay a huge amount of

money

and

time

to follow the latest style as

the

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way to show off their

finance

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finances

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and

keeping

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up with their peers.

That is

to say that changing clothes constantly or trying to own the most touch-notch devices

such

as

iPhone

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an iPhone

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and Macbook that might

unnecessary

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could be seen as most typical for

this

lifestyle. They pay for the most expensive devices to increase their appearance

values

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. Several years ago, the scene of long Chinese

youngers

line

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up all night for the first day of selling the newest iPhone model

has been

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was

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shared on many social network platforms and has

risen

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a question

by

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among

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the public about the tendency of high number addicted younger to

fashion

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the fashion

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trend

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trends

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.

On the other hand

, it could be wrong if we conclude that all younger

group

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groups

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attend to

this

situation. Many individuals prefer a simple lifestyle. they

also

buy necessary items and tend to choose lifetime and

good

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price technological products to save

money

.

For instance

,

according to

a survey in 2019 from Trent

university

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, 60% of students said that they care more about their laptop’s function than the model and brand of laptops.

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, there is

a

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majority of

young

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the young

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generation

prefer

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prefers

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to invest

time

and

money

to do

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many activities

such

as learning languages, studying majors and

improve

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improving

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their health. In conclusion,

although

some

youngers

waste their

money

and

time

in

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following the latest fashion trends, there are meaningful activities paid

the

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attention

by

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to by

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young people