Many people like to wear fashionable clothes. Why do you think this is the case? Is this a good thing or a bad think?

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Clothe is one of the most significant human

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. In today's world, wearing fashionable

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is trending. I believe,

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human nature to follow the trend and

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positive thinking.

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, there are many ways to follow fashion and dresses are

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must

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. It

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on the

occassion

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occasion

what kind of

dress

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suits

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suites

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stylish

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the stylish

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dress

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dresses

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can change one's

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courier

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, on

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interview one should wear

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dress

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if he can not he can face difficulties in future

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like, rejection. Fashionable

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a thing that we can live our

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happily and easily with all the trending fashions.

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, it

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helps to change others

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with you according to your fashionable personality.

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, wearing

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dress

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a dress

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for

someone

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special he can understand your

filling

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feeling

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through your dressing sense and you can easily express what you want to say.

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, if

someone

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wants to represents a marriage proposal in front of

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he can wear stylish

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that would

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her thinking for you due to your

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dressing. It depends on the person many people like wearing

fancy

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dress

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but many are not giving so much importance to fashion. According to me, people who

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not enjoy fashionable clothing

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are not enjoying their

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too. They

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today's lifestyle and they have to because they already missed many

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beautiful

experience

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life like

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making

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happier,

jaleous

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jealous

, having fun with fashion and with

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their self

theirself

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themselves

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. In conclusion, stylish

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not only the thing that we have to follow but it is a thing that we can enjoy and it will

definately

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definitely

we can see

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in a satisfactory position. Everyone

have

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to follow trending dresses according to

occassion

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occasion

and enjoy a

beutiful

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beautiful

, satisfied and amazing experience of

this

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world.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

302 words

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?