Some people think that cars are the best way to travel in a city, while others think that bicycles are better. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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adventurous part of everyone,s life. Travelling is easy via car, public transport, motorbikes or
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.Some
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think that cars are the best and convenient source of travelling while few thinking
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are good options. Here, in
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in support of cars because
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a very convenient and time savings vehicle. As we could see it's quite tough to manage the time between work and social life or personal life so cars are just
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easiest medium to make adjustments as one can finish work and
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travel to family in few minutes.
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, the whole family can travel by
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car very easily while it is very hard on
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as well it's comfortable to sit and good in any kind of weather while travelling.
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, few
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opine that
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are much better than any other because it's all way very healthy way of travelling and it makes a person fit and active who drives it.
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,
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are a great contribution to the environment as there is no noise and air pollution while using the cycle.
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,
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are affordable to any kind of
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so if everyone will give priority to cycles
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maybe there will be
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reduction of partiality between poor and rich. Overall, it can be observed from
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essay that both vehicles have their own importance as their own way so
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should just try to adapt that thing which can contribute to the country as well.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • commuting
  • adverse weather conditions
  • developed highway systems
  • personal space
  • time-efficient
  • safety and security features
  • environmentally friendly
  • air and noise pollution
  • healthier lifestyle
  • cost-effective
  • maintenance costs
  • congested city areas
  • navigate
  • traffic jams
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