‘Failure is proof that the desire wasn’t strong enough’ To what extent do you agree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is a nice saying "
Failure
is a key towards success". It is always not necessary that
person
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gets success in one go, sometimes it requires multiple
efforts
and nothing wrong in that, but your
efforts
should be in the right direction. So, it does not justify that
Failure
is proof that the
desire
or determination was not strong enough.
Furthermore
, I would like to provide my views on the same.
To begin
with there are multiple associated aspects with any endeavours, which affect the final result directly or indirectly.
In addition
, there could be several factors
such
as internal or external. Few of them might be easier to control, whereas
rest
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of the control. Along with
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there could be multiple challenges, in all these foremost important things, your
efforts
should be in an appropriate way with required all the facilities and support as without that it will be difficult to approach
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right track. In accordance with
this
, we can say if
efforts
are applied rightly with all preventive checks, considering all the required measurements,
subsequently
with proper resources and after
that
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you face
failure
just because of elements that are out of your control
then
it is unfair to say that "
desire
was not strong enough" With respect to the above points, herewith I would like to highlight my personal example that shows, after my 200%
efforts
, I could not crack my PMP certification in the
first
attempt. I had faced
failure
in my
first
attempt, no matter what my preparation was,
firstly
in the right direction,
secondly
with the correct study approach and
lastly
, by using suitable all resources. I missed obtaining a certification on the very
first
go just because of a couple of points and I faced
failure
. In
this
case, it is incorrect to say that my
desire
was not strong enough. To sum up, bright sides, any failures depend on multiple factors, so it is very wrong to say someone's
desire
was not strong enough, until and unless you have thoroughly investigated that.
Thereafter
, I would only say I do not agree to make
such
a statement easily.
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