Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
A progressing
number
of the general populace is opting to start their own companies
instead
of working for a company mainly because of increased support for young entrepreneurs. In my opinion, the primary drawbacks of not having an employer are lack of expertise and its overall effect on businesses
.
On the one hand, the number
of self-employed is related to young entrepreneurs and has its origin in widespread angel investment across a variety of industries. One well-known example of this
can be seen on the popular show "Shark Tank", where a panel of investors and executives of investment firms hear product pitches and compete to acquire stakes in budding entrepreneurs' businesses
. This
show has launched a number
of successful products, which has led to a trickle-down effect from the show. Not only has it turned specific dreams into realities, but it also
encourages viewers in general
to be more ambitious and has Add the comma(s)
, in general,
therefore
been one of the main catalysts for the frenzy of self-run business in recent years.
There are undoubtedly positives to all these start-up companies
, but I would argue that the overall impact is negative because it results in numerous poorly run businesses
. As an illustration, recently a dozen of ride-sharing apps including Uber, Grab, Go-Viet, and countless others have sprung up. The established companies
have managed to provide a functioning app with high-quality service to meet the growing demands of this
industry. However
, the vast majority of small start-ups find themselves in over their heads with apps that barely function and driver shortages that specialise in inconveniencing customers. It would be better for the people starting these derivative businesses
to either work in companies
, gain valuable experience, look for gaps in the market and then
develop worthy competitions or be content to have a steady job in a well-established corporation that they do not own.
In conclusion, the rising number
of self-run companies
has led to a cult of overconfidence. If more people were satisfied working for others rather than pursuing unrealisable ambitions, this
would be likely to better consumer products across the board as well as increased national economic prosperity.Submitted by vuanhhibstrading on
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...