Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A group of

people

think that the growing

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number

of

sport

is a great solution for

health

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problem

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in society. Others say that different

policy

is needed in

this

domain.

This

essay will attempt to elaborate on the various measures for improving public

health

.

Firstly

, there is a huge

number

of

people

whose

lifestyle

is sedentary nowadays.

As a result

,

people

are obese, they have

health

problems, and it leads to serious effects and inadequate

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of their body. In my opinion, it is a good idea to solve a

health

problem by increasing the

number

of

sport

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facilities,

such

as

sport

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grounds, halls and

section

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. These measures would help to detoxify the lifestyles of

people

, more active

lifestyle

through exercise and

sport

regime is the best way.

This

could be done through sponsorships of various competitions

such

as races or matches, marathons to raise awareness of different diseases.

Nevertheless

, these measures are not sufficient to address the problem. We need initiatives to implement a prevention

policy

of drugs and alcohol, promote a healthy

lifestyle

by champions or figureheads for involving more

people

in

sport

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activities.

In addition

, good nutrition, healthy diets and mental

health

should be noted in a

policy

of improving public

health

. Taking everything

in

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account, the

policy

of improving public

health

should contain not only increasing the

number

of

sport

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ground

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, but

also

a promote of

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health

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lifestyle

, programs of protecting

population

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the population

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from drugs, alcohol and cigarettes, and taking care of mental

health

of

public

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.