Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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think that the growing

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of

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is a great solution for

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problem

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in society. Others say that different

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is needed in

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domain.

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essay will attempt to elaborate on the various measures for improving public

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.

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, there is a huge

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of

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whose

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is sedentary nowadays.

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,

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are obese, they have

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problems, and it leads to serious effects and inadequate

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of their body. In my opinion, it is a good idea to solve a

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problem by increasing the

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of

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sport

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facilities,

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as

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sport

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grounds, halls and

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. These measures would help to detoxify the lifestyles of

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, more active

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through exercise and

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regime is the best way.

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could be done through sponsorships of various competitions

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as races or matches, marathons to raise awareness of different diseases.

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, these measures are not sufficient to address the problem. We need initiatives to implement a prevention

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of drugs and alcohol, promote a healthy

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by champions or figureheads for involving more

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in

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sport

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activities.

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, good nutrition, healthy diets and mental

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should be noted in a

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of improving public

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. Taking everything

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account, the

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of improving public

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should contain not only increasing the

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of

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sport

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ground

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, but

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a promote of

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lifestyle

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, programs of protecting

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the population

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from drugs, alcohol and cigarettes, and taking care of mental

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of

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the public

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.