Some people believe that it best to accept a bad situation, such as unsatisfactory job or shortage of money . Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Life
is full of ups and downs.
People
face various
difficults
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difficulties
and thrilling
experience
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in their
life
. Some
people
tend to be happy
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what they are gaining whereas some
people
never get satisfied
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what they have .
This
essay will discuss both these
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of view and argue in the favour of latter. From
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one point of view,
people
might think it is not good to focus on things that
makes
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you
primiliary
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primary
sad as well as uncomfortable. Since
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moving away from difficult
situation
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situations
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leads to
happy
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life
.
Also
,
people
who are careless about their job, money as well as
life
subsequently
fails in improving their lifestyle.
For instance
, the person suffering from
disease
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who doesn't have enough money to pay.
This
does not do any good to that person, as he cannot even afford to pay up his own bills.
On the other hand
, some believe attempting to do always best in
life
is always encouraging and influential. Most of the famous scientists tried so hard for all their
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which is known by the whole world now.
For example
:- Einstein was always poor in his studies,later he invented the theory of relativity and many other scientific facts, which is still used all over the world. If he was satisfied and accepted being bad in
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then
, he probably would not be known as a great
scientists
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. I personally believe that
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encouraging yourself in doing better is equal to having
beautiful
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lifestyle
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since you can experience
various
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spice
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of
life
. But, there should be some extent about influencing to do better
everyday
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,as being unsatisfactory in
eveything
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everything
can cause serious mental health problems. To conclude, there's only one
life
so,
people
should make
best
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out of it.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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