Some people think that children should learn to compete, but others think that they should be taught to co-operate so that they could become more useful adults. State some reasons for both views and give your opinion. You should write your essay in no more than 250 words.

Some people believe that

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should be competitive toward each other, while other counterparts argue that they should learn to work with

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to grow up to be

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model

citizens. From my point of view, I think

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should be both competitive and

cooporative

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cooperative

with

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. As human beings, we cannot exist all by ourselves.

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why learning to give a helping to each other is of importance.

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Cooperating

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with friends helps

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enhance their teamwork

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, as well as leadership. When working in a group, a child cannot do what he wants. He has to work out the task with

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.

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,

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not only enhance

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that they already have

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but

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learn new ones from their teammates.

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, one child has a head for figures and another is talented in physics. They can self teach each other so that both of them achieve desirable grades in tests.

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, competitions among

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can

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be

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beneficial

. Being competitive

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children

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’s personal

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and knowledge. They have to make use of everything they have to outdo their opponents.

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, when kids are preparing for exams, they ought to pull their socks up and fight tooth and nail to get the highest rank in the class. What

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more,

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get to learn problem-solving

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so that they can handle their own matters without having to count on anybody else

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,

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are more independent of their parents and teachers. In conclusion, while some people encourage

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to be competitive,

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opine that they should be working as a team

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of competing with each other. I am in

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of the idea that

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should be taught to be both competitive and

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cooperative

at the same time. Sometimes,when the assignments

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too difficult and complicated,

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need to work together to handle

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. But when it comes to personal achievements, they should be ready to compete with

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to get good results.