People buy a product if it fulfills their needs; there is no need for advertisement. To what extent do you agree or disagree with it? (personal viewpoint)

It is often the case that a person encounters innumerable

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in his/her all day long, and

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often leads to purchases that are sometimes unnecessary. Some people

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hold a belief that

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serve no useful purposes and there is no need for them, saying that

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are wise enough and will make a purchase when the product can accommodate their needs. From my perspective,

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is a rather crude and unsophisticated view and may even adversely affect our

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. Admittedly, the enormous number of

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and the seemingly beneficial functions of a product/service which one sees may encourage consumerism in his or her own thoughts. And

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the contributing factor of the throw-away

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among the majority of young people of late.

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, to say that there is no need for advertising somewhat underestimates its beneficial impacts on both consumers and

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, in its very core function,

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do inform

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of a product, which might indeed suit their needs and their economic status better than any other

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they have had prior knowledge of.

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, we should think of advertising not in terms of promoting unnecessary commodities but in terms of publicizing little-known ones.

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might be essential for the upstarts, who are innovative and want to sell their newly developed

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or services. It is usually the case that new companies have just a small part if not none of the market share, and with them, advertising their

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is the one and only way to make them known and help them reach

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. All too often, a young good corporation could not survive the fierce competition from well-established ones, and

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has deprived the

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of many handy

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services that these less

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companies offered, which could have contributed to the prosperity of our

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. In conclusion, to say that there is no place for advertising is to neglect its favourable impacts on both

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and

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also

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need to be more sensible while making purchases in order to avoid unnecessary buying. (345 words)