Many foods are shipped from far away. Some people think that eating local food is more environmentally and economically. Do you think the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

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of
food
items nowadays are exported from far away places. Some people believe that consuming local
food
items like fruits, vegetables, sweets etc. is better for
economy
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the economy
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as well as
environment
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the environment
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. I believe that having local
food
definitely has more advantages compared to shipped
food
and
this
essay will shed more light on it. On one
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having local
food
has its fair share of advantages.
Firstly
, it is good for
local
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the local
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economy
. The more people consume homegrown
food
,
more
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the more
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will be the supply and in
turn
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the local
economy
will benefit.
This
in turn will help local farmers and merchants economically.
Secondly
, shipped
food
always have extra shipping cost attached to it,
in addition
to, the extra taxes levied by the
goverment
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government
.
This
in
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turn, increases the cost of the
food
.
Thirdly
, shipped edibles are usually packaged, which is found
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have detrimental effects on human health. Fourthly, it is found that shipped
food
is subjected to added flavours and
colors
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colours
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in order to maintain its freshness which is again not good for health.
For example
, it is found that green apples which are imported in India are found to have high citrus elements which means they are not good for health.
On the other hand
, having only local refreshments does have its
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fare
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share of disadvantages.
Firstly
, locals get to eat
variety
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a variety
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of items
which
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that
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are usually not available locally. With the emergency of e-commerce, people now have access to foreign brands
such
as Hershey's and Snickers chocolates which were not available before.
Secondly
,
this
is
also
good for
national
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the national
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economy
because local
food
will be shipped internationally.
For example
, Kashmiri Apples and Assam tea
,
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is famous in foreign countries, which has helped
Indian
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the Indian
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economy
. As a matter of fact, India is one of the largest exporters of Tea in the world. Having shipped
food
definitely has its fair share of pros and cons but in my belief, the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages.
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  • Prediction or recommendation

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  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • carbon emissions
  • transportation
  • environmentally friendly
  • economically beneficial
  • local farmers
  • local economy
  • fresher
  • nutritious
  • food security
  • imports
  • preserving
  • traditional farming practices
  • biodiversity
  • limited variety
  • availability
  • cost
  • contributor
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