It is commonly believed that nowadays main factors that affect a child's development are media,pop culture and friends. A different point of view is that family plays the most significant role. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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, pop culture and the environment of

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have a main effect on a child's improvement,  while some believe that family's breeding plays the most significant role.In my view, education at home should take the

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place in a child's development.

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it should be noted, social

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and friends play an individual impact on

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' education. At

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,  it is commonly believed we receive some skills, talents by our family , so a plenty number of our capacity are inherited by them.It means, eventually , parent's nurture gives particular and necessary characters for their sons or girls.

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,  our

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are mirrors for us, as a consequence we take and show the same acts,speech,talent,skill,capacity, taste and so on.An argument of

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is our colloquial speech, we learn how to say , talk, speak from our

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owing to we live with them.

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, they teach us the so-called fundamental mineral, behaviour and it's really considerable for

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.

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, it's true that

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absorb both good and the worst information from

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  because it became to our daily habit.I can surely say , social

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posses-own widely influences on

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even adults. The

kids

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learn how to construct a column,  while some youngsters are watching a video whereby bring up wrong. Social

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, friends or pop culture are receiving a significant role in showing themselves as a habit, I guess. Because, 

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will tend to watch or use them from time to time,  on both the best and worst sides.For reducing cons,

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should control their

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, it is their obligation. In brief, I concur family should take a great role in

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' life, breeding

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. With regards to other surroundings or items, 

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have to control and share their

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' interests.