Development in technology has brought various environmental problems. Some believe that people need to live simpler lives to solve environmental problems. Others, however, believe technology is the way to solve these problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
The advancement in science
chaged
various environmental parameters. Correct your spelling
changed
Although
some belief
we should live a simple life without technological influence that will protect our mother earth,other Replace the word
believe
group
contradict Change the wording
groups
this
view. This
essaay
will discuss in the forthcoming paragraphs why Correct your spelling
essay
tecnology
makes our life perfect.
On the one Correct your spelling
technology
hand
, the history of mankind reflects the fact that in the
ancient Correct article usage
apply
times
people indeed had a good life. Change to a genitive case
time's
times'
However
, there were struggles for tiniest
of things,they enjoyed nature to the fullest. Correct article usage
the tiniest
Although
the foods that they consumed were purely organic , it was difficult to be collected and stored. Moreover
, to meet their near and dear ones they had travel
Fix the infinitive
to travel
by
foot. Change preposition
on
For example
, often in our books
we read stories about rulers and emperors taking several years to travel from one place to another. Henceforth, those times were simple, but Add a comma
,books
it
had Correct pronoun usage
they
its
own struggles.
Correct pronoun usage
their
On the other
hand
, the modern world has numerous scientific prosperity; thus
, giving us a comfortable living. The travel experiences to far places are seamless , and wide
use of Correct article usage
the wide
the
mobile phones keep humans closely connected. Advancement in agriculture Correct article usage
apply
help
us to preserve crops ; Change the verb form
helps
thus
, delivering it
across the world. Correct pronoun usage
them
This
helps in the growth of trade that has a beneficial impact on the economy. Moreover
, it is also
making availability
of edible commodities easier for human beings. Add an article
the availability
For instance
, the discovery of an aeroplane revolutionized our travelling experiences,people can reach their destination in few hours. Apart from that, various emergency substances can also
be transfered
to various places. Correct your spelling
transferred
Thus
, it has a vital impact on our survival.
To conclude, in my opinion, the relationship between the
nature and Change the article
apply
the
technology is "parasitic". They should go Correct article usage
apply
hand
in hand
for the progress of the living beings.Submitted by abhinaba.de on
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