Introduction
It has been considered that electric cars should be used
instead
of Linking Words
burn
fossil fuel Correct your spelling
burnt
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car
. I believe that by doing Fix the agreement mistake
cars
this
change we would be helping our planet.
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Body · 1
First
of all, electric cars are more environmentally friendly than fossil fuel cars. Linking Words
Which
means, Correct pronoun usage
This
less
pollutants Change the quantifier
fewer
been
release Add a missing verb
have been
to
our atmosphere and Change preposition
into
reduction
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a reduction
of
global warming.
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in
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But replacing it we would be producing less carbon dioxide into our planet, helping us live
in
a healthier planet.
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on
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Furthermore
, the reduction of pollutants results in Linking Words
decreased
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decrease
of
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apply
environmental
impact caused by pollution.
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the environmental
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As studies
has
shown that in the same distance driven an electric Change the verb form
have
car
would cause less impact Use synonyms
in
our environment than a fossil fuel Change preposition
on
car
.
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In addition
, Linking Words
electric
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the electric
an electric
car
is most likely to come with Use synonyms
an
artificial intelligence which could improve our safety on the roads.
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apply
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Consequently
, reducing accidents on the road as it has a system that can identify when there are any changes on the road.
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Conclusion
Finally
, based on what I have Linking Words
seeing
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seen
this
change would not just help our environment but would Linking Words
also
make our roads a safer place.Linking Words