Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can government do to help reduce this amount of rubbish produced

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Looking for a modern world, there are a lot of companies that producing rubbish. And it is certainly true that today's lifestyle has become so insensitive and uncivil

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ever. The level of garbage produced by us is growing every day.

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, every single thing in the world has a reason. A reason to destroy the Earth. According to

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recent research, our planet is mired in

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the rubbish

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. Birds, animals and fish are dying right now because of us and our disgusting lifestyle. The number of people living on Earth is constantly growing up, which means that waste from humans

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increasing too. Humanity

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safe

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everything, but after that we just cut down trees, kill animals and pollute the surrounding area.

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part of us

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not even know anything about ecology and how to use special eco-bags for saving our motherland. Perhaps, mankind should try to talk more about things like that. Incineration may

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like a solution, but it is not.

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process

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us to

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global air pollution, commensurate with the harm of giant fires (

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as a fire in a Taiga in 2019 and fires in Turkey and Yakutia in 2021). The only sane decision in

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case, from my point of view, is

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using resources

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as plastic and other poorly decomposing materials.

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, we need to promote a detailed system of sorting garbage and

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should be taken into account from an early age,

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may be

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, at school. To sum up,

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out

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planet

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is slowly losing

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life because of people. And if

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situation would not be stopped, all of us die. Taking care of your home is equal to taking care of yourself.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 4.0

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4 paragraphs

285 words

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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can government do to help reduce this amount of rubbish produced

Fully explain your ideas

Social media marketing can influence what consumers buy. Do you agree or disagree? To what extent do you agree?

Some people say in order to prevent illness and disease governments should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Scientist agree that many people eat too much junk food and it is damanging their health. Some people think that this problem can be solved by education people while others believe that this education will not work. Discuss buth view and give your opinion.

Some people dislike change in their sociality and their own lives and want things to stay the same. *why do some people want things to say the same? *why should change be regarded as something positive?

Some people dislike change in their sociality and their own lives and want things to stay the same. why do some people want things to say the same? why should change be regarded as something positive?