Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some individuals are of the opinion that college education aims to assist graduates with satisfactory jobs while others opined that higher institution has is more beneficial for both the scholars and society. I agree that college studies
has
more effect on the students and environment.
On the one hand, Change the verb form
have
university
degree impacts students and prepares them for their future. Correct article usage
a university
This
gives them insight Linking Words
on
what is ahead of them after graduation. Change preposition
into
Furthermore
, the higher institution is a preparatory ground for different departments, Linking Words
which
persons learn and develop themselves in the different fields they want to study, Change preposition
in which
such
as medicine, engineering, law, etc. Linking Words
For instance
, engineering students in Niger Delta University are taken to workshops all through their study years to enable them Linking Words
develop
their practical skills in the engineering department. Add the particle
to develop
As a result
, these scholars when they graduate are good with technical know-how and as Linking Words
such
get satisfactory employment.
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On the other hand
, Linking Words
college
education is vital not just for the individual alone but Add an article
a college
also
for the society at large. Linking Words
Moreover
, when a person is satisfied with his or her job the environment is sane. The reason is that schools improve Linking Words
a
society by training people as responsible adults. Remove the article
apply
For instance
, in my current place of employment, a humanitarian lawyer goes around the community helping the less privileged that are being oppressed by others to fight for their properties without charges and Linking Words
also
paying tuition fees for those who cannot Linking Words
afford
. Correct pronoun usage
themafford
As a result
, she is giving back to the environment and making it a better place to live in.
In conclusion, Linking Words
although
higher educational background helps with Linking Words
well paid
jobs for graduates, I believe that it is more beneficial and impactful both on the student and the world.Add a hyphen
well-paid
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