Some people think certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind bars. To what extent do you agree?

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increased to

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extreme level. In order to stop

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unenthical

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unethical

things,

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should definitely be serious and reasonable. So,

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do not dare to go for

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activities again and again, which are harmful to

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unpaid

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work

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rather than being put behind the bars. As I strongly believe, even a small unethical activity is an

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and a

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should pay for it.

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my point of

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, would like to

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, nowadays

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are so smart that before carrying out any

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they always evaluate

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consequences. And if those are not so strict, in that case, they won't mind

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it again and again, which are inappropriate. In

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should not take a risk to keep the

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easy going

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.

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, there should be a comparatively strict verdict even though an

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is small.

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, we could get

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success in order to diminish the

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ratio to

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some extent. For

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example, if someone has robbed the gold shop and in return, he or she gets a

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in terms of

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unpaid

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work

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for a certain duration,

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they

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get a chance to mingle with the

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a social gathering,

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there are high chances that

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of regretting, that

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might get encouraged to carry out

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such

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offenses

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even

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time.

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,

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sort of punishments will not at all help a

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to realise their mistake.

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to the above, in fact,

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government

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should include

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unpaid

community

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work

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along with

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significant

punishment

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. There are many positive outcomes of

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action

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and no adverse effects.

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optimistic result that our

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will get

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special attention as in today's busy life, the

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are damn occupied that they do not care about the

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and miss to do the special things for them. And by including an add on task, even a

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will come to know the importance of the

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and help to make them an understand about their inappropriate action, which affects the surrounding by any

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but not least,

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including the unpaid

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community

work

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along with any punishments will really help to mould the

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towards

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society

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a society

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that is

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really essential. To sum

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with, I would like to highly recommend that there should not be only

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an

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work

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as a

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,

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however

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it should be tied up with the main

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.

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way, we can achieve a win-win situation in all

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aspects.