Some people think certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind bars. To what extent do you agree?

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offence

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increased to

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extreme level. In order to stop

such

unenthical

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unethical

things,

punishment

should definitely be serious and reasonable. So,

people

do not dare to go for

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activities again and again, which are harmful to

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society

. In accordance with

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, I am not ln line with the statement that certain prisoners should be made to do

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unpaid

community

work

rather than being put behind the bars. As I strongly believe, even a small unethical activity is an

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and a

person

should pay for it.

To begin

with

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my point of

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, would like to

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, nowadays

people

are so smart that before carrying out any

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they always evaluate

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consequences. And if those are not so strict, in that case, they won't mind

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it again and again, which are inappropriate. In

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,

firstly

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government

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should not take a risk to keep the

punishment

easy going

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.

Secondly

, there should be a comparatively strict verdict even though an

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is small.

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, we could get

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success in order to diminish the

prisoners

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ratio to

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some extent. For

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example, if someone has robbed the gold shop and in return, he or she gets a

punishment

in terms of

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unpaid

community

work

for a certain duration,

furthermore

they

also

get a chance to mingle with the

people

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a social gathering,

then

there are high chances that

instead

of regretting, that

person

might get encouraged to carry out

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such

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even

next

time.

Consequently

,

such

sort of punishments will not at all help a

person

to realise their mistake.

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to the above, in fact,

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government

goverment

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should include

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unpaid

community

work

along with

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significant

punishment

. There are many positive outcomes of

such

action

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and no adverse effects.

Foremost

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optimistic result that our

society

will get

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special attention as in today's busy life, the

people

are damn occupied that they do not care about the

society

and miss to do the special things for them. And by including an add on task, even a

person

will come to know the importance of the

society

and help to make them an understand about their inappropriate action, which affects the surrounding by any

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.

Last

but not least,

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including the unpaid

communiy

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community

work

along with any punishments will really help to mould the

person

towards

society

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that is

really essential. To sum

up

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with, I would like to highly recommend that there should not be only

ans

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an

unpaid

community

work

as a

punishment

,

however

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it should be tied up with the main

punishment

.

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this

way, we can achieve a win-win situation in all

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aspects.