You would like to rent a car for a holiday. Write to the car rental agency. In your letter •Explain what type of car you would like •Give details of when you would like the car • Request more information about the cost You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Dear Sir, I am writing express my ideas about wanting to rent a
car
in your company. I want a
car
that can
sit
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seven people.Because I will be
traveling
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travelling
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to Phoenix Ancient Town with my
my
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family members on next Saturday. I
also
want to
car
with
large
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a large
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space and high seat
confort
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comfort
.
On
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One
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of the main
reason
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is that my grandmother is very old, and I want her to enjoy
the
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a
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good time with our family
while
maintain
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a relaxed and good physical condition.
In addition
, I hope to have the
car
delivered to 156 Yilin Avenue next Friday, as I need to pack my luggage in advance.
Moreover
, I expect that its oil consumption spend is slower
becausue
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because
I don’t want to spend too much time going to the gas station. Meanwhile, I would like to know if the cleaning cost of the
car
needs to be paid extra, or if there will be a discount on the next
car
rental.
Lastly
, I look forward to hearing from you, and if you have any
further
informantion
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information
, please do not hesitate to contact me. Yours faithfully, Xiyue Tang
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Clarity
Try to ensure clarity and precision in your sentences. For example, 'I am writing express my ideas about wanting to rent a car in your company' could be more directly stated as 'I am writing to request a car rental from your company.'
Organization
Consider using paragraphs to organize your content for better readability. Start a new paragraph for introducing different requests or aspects of your inquiry, such as the type of car, rental period, and questions about costs.
Accuracy
Be attentive to grammatical accuracy and word choice. For instance, 'oil consumption spend is slower' could be revised to 'I am looking for a car with low fuel consumption.'
Tone
The letter is polite and expresses the requests clearly, making it easy for the recipient to understand the main points.
Closing
The closing of the letter is appropriately formal and polite, setting a good tone for professional communication.

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