Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Mrs Emmini James Mental health social worker Sydney process counselling and therapy 6 Russell
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NSW 2000 10/09/2012 Dear Mrs James Re:
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Age:40 years I am writing
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into your facility and to request for therapeutic counselling for him and his wife as they adjust to retirement and he needs link with services in the community. As per the medical history,
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has been suffering severe depression and anxiety disorder for which electroconvulsive therapy and antidepressants were administered;
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has a demanding administrative position and powerful work ethics, he had a habit of consuming alcohol and smoking.He lives with his wife and they have one son stays in disability centre owing to Down's syndrome and a daughter who is in military service.He has his siblings as neighbours;
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hypertension,and is likely for suicidal thoughts. In view of the above,it would be greatly appreciated, if you could provide an efficient therapeutic counselling for
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and his wife to adapt with retirement and
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engage in community services. Should you have any queries ,please do not hesitate to contact me . Yours sincerely Registered Nurse North Sydney Medical Practice
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • gender diversity
  • fostering innovation
  • educational experience
  • enforcing gender quotas
  • merit and potential
  • individual achievements
  • natural differences
  • gender equality
  • reducing gender stereotypes
  • balanced workforce
  • traditionally male-dominated or female-dominated fields
  • fluctuating applicant numbers
  • compromise on quality
  • diversity aspects
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