Many companies use advertisement to increase sales. What are the main reasons that make an advertisement effective? Is it a good thing or bad thing to the society?

Many
companys
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companies
are using
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advertisement
nowadays to help their sales
increases
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.
That is
due to the fact that
advertisement
is helping the product to be known
at
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a large basis . While in the past , you have to spend a lot of time and money to find what are you really need , now you can save your time and money as you can find
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in
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your phone . In
this
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I will
allustrate
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illustrate
why it is a good thing we use
advertisement
. How
advertisement
is a good thing ? With all the different
optioins
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options
we have as
a consumers
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a consumer
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, we need to know ;where I can find what I need without spending time or money on other products .
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, As a
client
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I would love to see an
advertisement
helps
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that helps
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me to see the advantages of some products or give me the
oppertounitiy
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opportunity
to get to know
new
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one and see its benefits. In conclusion ,
advertisement
is the window for the world .
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