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Although more and more people read the news on internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news for the majority of people. Do you agree or disagree?

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Despite the fact, that ocean full of
news
 is available on the
internet
, the majority of people, still tend to read the
newspaper
. I strongly disagree, with the statement, that traditional newspapers will prevail in existing times of technology.
This
 essay discusses the carnage of conventional newspapers, with the arrival of new social platforms. To embark upon, the
Internet
 revolution has taken conventional
newspaper
 for a toss. With, the arrival of social media platforms like
,
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 Twitter and Facebook,
news
 has been rampantly spread throughout the
internet
 within few minutes of emergence. Instant
news
 availability in mobiles and other electronic devices had bought revolutionary change at the outlook of the bulletin.
For instance
, In the olden days, to know if a particular team in cricket /soccer had won, people used to wait till the
next
 day morning, to have a look at the
newspaper
, but with the
internet
, the good/bad
news
 will be telecasted live.
Moreover
, Electronic gadgets being portable, gives the user, access to the
newspaper
, wherever, at any point of time and location with the availability of the
internet
. Various applications like in-shorts and Times are providing offline
news
, without
internet
 access. With the increase in
sales
 in electronics, the graph of
newspaper
sales
 has drastically reduced. To bolster, the statement, Survey conducted by “Republic TV” stated that, in the recent year of 2017,
sales
 of
news
-papers have decreased by 7%, while electronic gadgets
sales
 increased by 4%. In conclusion, Technological advancements have choked traditional
newspaper
 publishers. Changing times, predict that in following years, conventional
news
-papers will become obsolete and rise of electronics and technology. It is
also
 foreseen that artificial intelligence will take over broadcasting channels source in the imminent future.
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