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Although more and more people read the news on internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news for the majority of people. Do you agree or disagree?

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Despite the fact, that ocean full of
news
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 is available on the
internet
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, the majority of people, still tend to read the
newspaper
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. I strongly disagree, with the statement, that traditional newspapers will prevail in existing times of technology.
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 essay discusses the carnage of conventional newspapers, with the arrival of new social platforms. To embark upon, the
Internet
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 revolution has taken conventional
newspaper
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 for a toss. With, the arrival of social media platforms like
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 Twitter and Facebook,
news
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 has been rampantly spread throughout the
internet
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 within few minutes of emergence. Instant
news
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 availability in mobiles and other electronic devices had bought revolutionary change at the outlook of the bulletin.
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, In the olden days, to know if a particular team in cricket /soccer had won, people used to wait till the
next
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 day morning, to have a look at the
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, but with the
internet
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, the good/bad
news
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 will be telecasted live.
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, Electronic gadgets being portable, gives the user, access to the
newspaper
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, wherever, at any point of time and location with the availability of the
internet
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. Various applications like in-shorts and Times are providing offline
news
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, without
internet
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 access. With the increase in
sales
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 in electronics, the graph of
newspaper
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sales
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 has drastically reduced. To bolster, the statement, Survey conducted by “Republic TV” stated that, in the recent year of 2017,
sales
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 of
news
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-papers have decreased by 7%, while electronic gadgets
sales
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 increased by 4%. In conclusion, Technological advancements have choked traditional
newspaper
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 publishers. Changing times, predict that in following years, conventional
news
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-papers will become obsolete and rise of electronics and technology. It is
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 foreseen that artificial intelligence will take over broadcasting channels source in the imminent future.
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