Nowadays, most children prefer to spend several hours playing with electronic devices over doing more traditional leisure activities. What problem does this cause? What do you think are possible solutions? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience Write at least 250 words.

In today's ,era the young generation prefers to spend time playing

games

on computers and mobile phones and

pay

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very little attention to traditional leisure activities. In the following paragraphs, I will explain the repercussions of playing electronic

games

and how

this

problem can be solved by giving certain solutions.

Firstly

, overuse of electronic devices has an adverse effect on

children

's health as sitting in the wrong posture and playing

games

the whole day can possibly cause back problems.

Moreover

,

this

is the root cause of

children

's obesity and weak eyesight.

For instance

, a child starts playing the game and

while

playing he feels hungry and starts eating junk and

then

again

resume

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his game with no physical activity.

Secondly

, if

this

situation

will remain

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the same

then

there will be no bond between

parents

and

children

.

Because youngsters

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Youngsters

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like to play

games

and get involved in that play so much that it weakens the bond with the

parents

. So, to deal with the situation,

parents

should devote some time to their offspring by keeping aside their work. They should try to teach their

children

that what are the benefits of doing physical activities.

Apart from

this

, there is

need

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of

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for

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the hour that in school some competitions should be organised related to traditional leisure activities so that a child develops his interest in that game.

For example

,

If in

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if

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a school competition is organised

then

definitely students will take part in that activity and to perform well they will

practice

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practise

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it after school hours

also

.

Likewise

, their interest will be developed and ,

this

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apply

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if

parents

motivate them

then

their confidence will boost

up

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apply

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. After some days

children

will find

change

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a change

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in themself and will start avoiding electronic play.

To conclude

, I would like to say that even electronic

games

can develop the mental ability of players as in the case of crossword, puzzles but overuse of anything leads to bad consequences.

Therefore

parents

should give attention to their

offsprings

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that

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and

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what they are doing in daily life and should light the path with the right guidance.