Nowadays, most children prefer to spend several hours playing with electronic devices over doing more traditional leisure activities. What problem does this cause? What do you think are possible solutions? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

In today's ,era the young generation prefers to spend time playing

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on computers and mobile phones and

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very little attention to traditional leisure activities. In the following paragraphs, I will explain the repercussions of playing electronic

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and how

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problem can be solved by giving certain solutions.

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, overuse of electronic devices has an adverse effect on

children

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's health as sitting in the wrong posture and playing

games

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the whole day can possibly cause back problems.

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,

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is the root cause of

children

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's obesity and weak eyesight.

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, a child starts playing the game and

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playing he feels hungry and starts eating junk and

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again

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his game with no physical activity.

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, if

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situation

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the same

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there will be no bond between

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and

children

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.

Because youngsters

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Youngsters

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like to play

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and get involved in that play so much that it weakens the bond with the

parents

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. So, to deal with the situation,

parents

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should devote some time to their offspring by keeping aside their work. They should try to teach their

children

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that what are the benefits of doing physical activities.

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this

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, there is

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of

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the hour that in school some competitions should be organised related to traditional leisure activities so that a child develops his interest in that game.

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,

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a school competition is organised

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definitely students will take part in that activity and to perform well they will

practice

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it after school hours

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.

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, their interest will be developed and ,

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this

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if

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motivate them

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their confidence will boost

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. After some days

children

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will find

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in themself and will start avoiding electronic play.

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, I would like to say that even electronic

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can develop the mental ability of players as in the case of crossword, puzzles but overuse of anything leads to bad consequences.

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parents

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should give attention to their

offsprings

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that

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what they are doing in daily life and should light the path with the right guidance.