People think that government should increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles to solve environmental problems. Give your opinion.
The world has been suffering from the burning issue of pollution created by different
kind
of vehicles. It is believed by some that Fix the agreement mistake
kinds
rise
in fossil Correct article usage
a rise
fuel
price
can reduce usages of cars and other conveyances which will impact Fix the agreement mistake
prices
environment
positively. There are both merits and demerits of Add an article
the environment
this
trend and this
essay will explain that an increase of
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in
fuel
cost is not a proper way to reduce ecological problems.
At present crude oil is the main source of fuel
. Therefore
, increase
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of
oil Change preposition
in
cost
can even worsen the current situation because it is the only reliable gas source. Fix the agreement mistake
costs
In addition
, no matter how expensive the oil customers will try to purchase it,
unless Remove the comma
apply
any
alternative is provided by the government. Correct your spelling
an
For example
, hike
in taxation for tobacco goods did not reduce its sales and the same will happen with petroleum as well.
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a hike
On the other hand
, authority
should impose strict Add an article
the authority
law
and introduce more public transports, so that general people prefer to use communal transportations Fix the agreement mistake
laws
instead
of using private cars. Secondly
, Scientists should focus on development
of alternative energy which can be available in Add an article
the development
market
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the market
is
less price that will not impact the surroundings widely. Change preposition
at is
For instance
, Tesla invented electric cars that can perform with electric
power source, which is renewable and Add an article
an electric
the electric
results
zero carbon emission. Add the preposition
inresults
fromresults
Hence
step by step we can eliminate the greenhouse gas release. The outcome will be clean
and green atmosphere.
In conclusion, all Add an article
the clean
a clean
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data shows that only Correct article usage
the above
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the Replace the word
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fuel
price will not reduce global warming effects. Some strong alternative measures need to be implemented to tackle the situation.Submitted by shaunakdesai on
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