People think that government should increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles to solve environmental problems. Give your opinion.

The world has been suffering from the burning issue of pollution created by different
kind
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of vehicles. It is believed by some that
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in fossil
fuel
price
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can reduce usages of cars and other conveyances which will impact
environment
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positively. There are both merits and demerits of
this
trend and
this
essay will explain that an increase
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fuel
cost is not a proper way to reduce ecological problems. At present crude oil is the main source of
fuel
.
Therefore
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of
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oil
cost
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can even worsen the current situation because it is the only reliable gas source.
In addition
, no matter how expensive the oil customers will try to purchase it
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unless
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alternative is provided by the government.
For example
,
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in taxation for tobacco goods did not reduce its sales and the same will happen with petroleum as well.
On the other hand
,
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should impose strict
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and introduce more public transports, so that general people prefer to use communal transportations
instead
of using private cars.
Secondly
, Scientists should focus on
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of alternative energy which can be available in
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is
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less price that will not impact the surroundings widely.
For instance
, Tesla invented electric cars that can perform with
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an electric
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power source, which is renewable and
results
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zero carbon emission.
Hence
step by step we can eliminate the greenhouse gas release. The outcome will be
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and green atmosphere. In conclusion, all
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data shows that only
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the
fuel
price will not reduce global warming effects. Some strong alternative measures need to be implemented to tackle the situation.
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