Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is argued that the number of

male

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and

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must be the same in every

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courses

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taught in

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I am going to explain why I completely disagree with the statement and

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, I believe that there are several subjects to choose

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university

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and some

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are suitable for

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males

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and others for

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females

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, for

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examples

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I am a student and I am studying economics and finance where the major of

students

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are male because the girls do not want to attend these

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because they do not like it. In

contraddiction

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, there are some subjects where there are several

female

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for instance

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the course which taught how to become a professor is full of

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, in my

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if the

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try

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to accept the equal number of male and female in every subject the difference of student there will be and so

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need to choose whatever they want.

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the

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can attend the course they want, in some countries it is impossible for a person to choose what to study, for

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in some

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university

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the girl can not attend

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some

courses

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because it is believed that they are more suitable for men. In conclusion, I think that the

students

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have to choose the subject they want and the

university

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must give the

oppurtunity

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opportunity

to attend each course the student desire without differences between male and female.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

247 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

gender diversity
fostering innovation
educational experience
enforcing gender quotas
merit and potential
individual achievements
natural differences
gender equality
reducing gender stereotypes
balanced workforce
traditionally male-dominated or female-dominated fields
fluctuating applicant numbers
compromise on quality
diversity aspects

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Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

Many young people do not spend their holidays and weekends doing outdor activities like hiking and climbing in nstural environment. Whu is this case? How theycsn be encouraged to go out?

Many small businesses are being forced to close because they cannot compete with multinational corporations. What problems does this cause, and how can those problems be solved?

University should accept equal number of male and female students in every subject. What extent do you agree or disagree?

Some young people like to copy the behavior and clothes of famous Korean people today. Why do you think this is happening? What impacts may it have on society?