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Education is not a luxury, but a basic human right and as such should be free for everyone irrespective of personal wealth. Do you agree or disagree?

#education #luxury #right #wealth
It is a contentious issue in the
community
 that, learning is a basic human right.
In addition
, it should not be charged despite personal wealth since by the end of the day it is not a bed of roses.
First
 of all, a society with learned people develops
as a result
 it is in a position to contribute positively towards improving the
community
.
Nevertheless
, wherever everyone in the society can afford
education
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 is an added merit as they can have a common understanding by
this
, they will all have knowledge and skill.
For instance
, in Britain learning is free
thus
 there is
100
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% transition to free
education
.
Moreover
, the children have developed knowing that there is no negotiation about going to school to study.
Therefore
 free
education
 has facilitated
well-being
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 of the
community
 in that children can all attend school.
Secondly
, despite the wealthy
community
 have a notion that free
education
 is substandard as
such
 teachers are not motivated to be productive.
Hence
 they opt to pay for the
education
 as they claim it is quality. A research that was done by
University
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 of India,
Education
 Department shows that
,
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 80% of parents prefer private schools where they pay fees.
Therefore
,
this
indicate
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 that
,
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 they don’t believe in free
education
 and in
this
 case those who cannot afford to pay for
such
 kind of learning
feels
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 secluded when they intermingle with other students leading to some kind of relaxation toward
education
, replacing it with other chores.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fundamental right
  • accessible
  • social mobility
  • personal and professional development
  • overall development
  • equality
  • social disparities
  • access
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