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Living in a country where you have to speak in a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Do you have difficulty writing a to what extent do you agree or disagree essay?

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To not know the
language
 of the place we live can definitely cause social as well as practical problems, as
language
 is significant for communication. In
this
 essay, I will give the reasons
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how problematic can it be to stay in a country like that.
For instance
, let's take a scenario where a young girl has shifted to the United Kingdom to study.
However
, there could be any
such
 instance where she might be out on some work and because of not knowing the
language
, there are high chances of the girl getting trapped.
This
 can be a major point of concern as it can be highly detrimental for the girl.
In addition
, adults can
also
 be easily fooled.
For example
, let's think a man had to shift to Australia on the virtue of his work and would be staying there for few years. By not knowing the native dialect, he can easily be cheated by house owners or by
shop keepers
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 by getting charged more than needed.
Moreover
, let's imagine a situation where a woman had to shift to the United States due to few reasons and due to not knowing the
language
, she will not be able to communicate with her neighbours or to the locals there. She would be feeling so lonely and eventually could be extremely excruciating for the women. In conclusion, I personally agree that now knowing the native
language
 of the country can have serious repercussions on
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individuals.
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